Encountering MY Essay

Although it may seem as if my essay needed a major amount of work, in the eyes of the authors of these two pieces, it seems like it went right along with what they were trying to convey. My essay is more of a nonfictional piece describing an experience. They said specifically that it is very hard to define what constricts essays to the english language. Actually, I think it fits more along the imaginative modern American essays. My voice really pops through the page and thats what I was aiming for. What I can improve upon in the essay though is again what I went over in my last posts and fixing up the structure so that it fits among these forms of writing.