Feedback on Letter

I edited my letter to Crest and I am currently working on my presentation for class tomorrow. I chose to do the oral presentation because I believe that would be the best way to present my project. The feedback Mrs. Scott send via email to us was a change from the past feedbacks in that she did not specifically go through the document but she did send us comments specific to the paper. She talked about specific points and I believe this was very helpful, for instance she told me to fix the end of my letter where it goes off on a tangent and make it more specific towards what my point is.