Comments on Research Proposal

After reading Mrs. Scott's comments on the research proposal I have realized how real these proposals actually need to be. All those details that I thought I could pass by like not writing my email and number on the cover sheet were covered by her. The comments provide the specificity in the guidelines that were not as clear when we started the assignment. Such things as capitalization of certain words such as dentist and being more specific in the methods section will really help me edit this and make it become more complete when the final portfolio is due. This type of one on one feedback really helps me understand what I did wrong and how to fix it, I certainly like it and when I am editing my whole proposal for submission in the final portfolio, I will understand what to fix as it is clearly stated right in front of me.